~ Bliss ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Bliss ~

Rating: 4.3

Fountain of Bliss
Flowing thro’
the universe
Day & night
Many quanta of nectars
spilling up
Into infinite sky.

In bounties
sun & moon
And remain
ever radiant
As un-ending halo-
With eternal completeness
of universe
in life
& Thine halo.

(Why) : Sitting absorbed
- and centered in self?
Look around
Broadening bosom
Accept all tiny sorrows
as trifling one
Fill with love
The voidness
in life.
Adapted from Rabindranath Tagore

Ken E Hall 21 September 2010

reading this poem is like taking a shower under the fountain of bliss to kiss life's parade...10/10 regards

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Louis Cecile 24 September 2010

I quite like the concept of the poem...I feel there is more that could be explored and imagined. Especially taking the first two parts of the piece. I guess bliss is such a concept of exploration in life that I wanted more.

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Brendan Mccallum 02 October 2010

I like but have to agree with louis, the bone needs more meat, Bliss is a big word, it is all of everything, maybe I was expecting too much after reading your title, hope I am not coming across as harsh, like what you do Niv, blessings Brendan.

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Dove Allen 02 October 2010

Ahhh... to contemplate 'bliss'...nirvana to some...to others an ice cream sundae with whipped cream and a cherry on top! lol! ;) Remembering the value of observation makes one want to soar with eagles and watch troubles appear miniscule from a bird's eye point of view! May your fountain of endless happiness never run dry! Great write....full of sage wisdom! Thanks for sharing!

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Lee Mack 02 October 2010

Nice...bliss or love already a poetry? Don't worry, be happy swallowing...

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A B Faniki 08 September 2019

An intresting piece.

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Dr Antony Theodore 24 August 2015

so much of grace, feeling and emotion in your words. Accept all tiny sorrows as trifling one Fill with love The voidness in life. sorrows, life and love. perennial themes. loved it

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Marvin Brato 24 September 2013

Excellent reflection about what made make life endearing!

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Yasmin Khan 18 July 2013

A spiritual poem written by an enlightened writer.

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John Raubenheimer 01 May 2013

Thank you for widening my perspective of your poems. The last stanza in this one has a deep resonance.

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