~ Bliss ~ - Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

Fountain of Bliss
Flowing thro’
the universe
Day & night
Many quanta of nectars
spilling up
Into infinite sky.

In bounties
sun & moon
And remain
ever radiant
As un-ending halo-
With eternal completeness
of universe
in life
& Thine halo.

(Why) : Sitting absorbed
- and centered in self?
Look around
Broadening bosom
Accept all tiny sorrows
as trifling one
Fill with love
The voidness
in life.
Adapted from Rabindranath Tagore

Comments about ~ Bliss ~ by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

  • (10/11/2015 5:16:00 PM)

    Fill with love
    The voidness
    in life the human being attachment is pure bliss on both sides...heaven or hell...if you believe...oops or is that Adam and lilith...story on top of story as the tell goes...and tails be running far and wide...outside and inside..freedom voice..pen and paper...(An-un ending halo) say the your work
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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (8/24/2015 12:04:00 AM)

    so much of grace, feeling and emotion in your words.
    Accept all tiny sorrows
    as trifling one
    Fill with love
    The voidness
    in life. sorrows, life and love. perennial themes. loved it
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  • (9/24/2013 11:26:00 PM)

    Excellent reflection about what made make life endearing! (Report) Reply

  • Yasmin Khan (7/18/2013 1:43:00 PM)

    A spiritual poem written by an enlightened writer. (Report) Reply

  • (5/1/2013 3:49:00 PM)

    Thank you for widening my perspective of your poems. The last stanza in this one has a deep resonance. (Report) Reply

  • Okoronkwo Jackson Jonathan (12/26/2012 7:15:00 PM)

    nothing intrigues me more as to seeing nature appreciated and that you've exactly done. Beautiful poem you have there (Report) Reply

  • (5/28/2012 11:13:00 AM)

    Once again I'm commenting such a poem worth reading and commenting

    Maestro RNT is UN-parallel and ever new....

    Unforgettable...once RNT commented if all my writing readers become oblivious my song will stay aglowing this poem is translation from song [lyric] of his writing

    Keep it up...looking more such transcreation from you...please hear us
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  • Ramesh Rai (5/21/2012 4:30:00 AM)

    a beautiful poem, i think composed with a cool mind. (Report) Reply

  • (3/27/2012 2:03:00 AM)

    Grace, elegance and feeling. I really enjoyed the minimalist simplicity and strength of the poem. Wondreful! (Report) Reply

  • Alicia Meyers (12/3/2011 12:02:00 PM)

    I love this poem! It's fantastic! (Report) Reply

  • Adi Cox (7/23/2011 2:08:00 AM)

    A very imaginative poem that feels good to read. I do not understand this poem because it is so original but it is enjoyable to read. It takes the reader to an imaginative place that is a pleasure to inhabit. (Report) Reply

  • (3/21/2011 10:46:00 AM)

    Greetings Ms.Nivedita
    I like this poem. It puts me where I want to be, blissfully in heaven. The last part brought me down, so I read the first 2 parts again, but not the 3rd.
    Good Job
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  • (12/31/2010 4:19:00 PM)

    Your poem is realy out of the box.You bring a strange and wonderful creative way of seeing things through your poems (Report) Reply

  • (10/17/2010 9:00:00 AM)

    Dear friend,
    i read your poem 'Bliss' and i got tied up. I tried to release myself from the flickering darkness of living. But oops. I am not able to free myself. You have said it is a replica of Rabindranth Tagores poem. But when there is no full moon even the stars are bright and serene. A truth is always sweeter and wonderful even if is retold. We would not have our vedas and scriptures if there had been no people; who treasured and valued it.
    Thanks for your valuable thoughts.

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  • Miroslava Odalovic (10/15/2010 3:41:00 AM)

    (Why) : Sitting absorbed
    - and centered in self?
    Was just thinking that being self-centered and going out of the box can be equally 'useful' (don't like the word sounds so utilitarian, can't think of another at the moment) . But you're right (and hopefully happy) going out to share both ones insights and outsights good way to overcome oneself.
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  • (10/2/2010 7:42:00 PM)

    Nice...bliss or love already a poetry? Don't worry, be happy swallowing... (Report) Reply

  • (10/2/2010 3:24:00 PM)

    Ahhh... to contemplate 'bliss'...nirvana to others an ice cream sundae with whipped cream and a cherry on top! lol! ;) Remembering the value of observation makes one want to soar with eagles and watch troubles appear miniscule from a bird's eye point of view! May your fountain of endless happiness never run dry! Great write....full of sage wisdom! Thanks for sharing! (Report) Reply

  • (10/2/2010 11:10:00 AM)

    I like but have to agree with louis, the bone needs more meat, Bliss is a big word, it is all of everything, maybe I was expecting too much after reading your title, hope I am not coming across as harsh, like what you do Niv, blessings Brendan. (Report) Reply

  • Louis Cecile (9/24/2010 12:02:00 PM)

    I quite like the concept of the poem...I feel there is more that could be explored and imagined. Especially taking the first two parts of the piece. I guess bliss is such a concept of exploration in life that I wanted more. (Report) Reply

  • (9/21/2010 4:50:00 AM)

    reading this poem is like taking a shower under the fountain of bliss to kiss life's parade...10/10 regards (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 7, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, January 27, 2012

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