Can You See Poem by David Knox

Can You See



can you see the boy here
do you see it my dear
cant you see this is me
i may look different not like i used to be
such adversity has changed it all
fall after fall
has changed me so much
and now i look like and talk like such
maybe not for the best
maybe now im worse then all the rest
i really dont know
i dont pretend or put on a fancy show
this is me accept it or not

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 22 April 2016

Interesting poem. Yes, we must be ourselves, no matter what others may think. Good poem. Read mine - Who Am I - Adeline

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Evaughn Gray 05 October 2007

david your such a good poet...this poem is strong, , , very good poem...~hazel

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Anita Blake 05 October 2007

powerful write, great job

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