James Pritchard

Rookie (11. May 1993 / Bamberg, Germany)

Candace - Poem by James Pritchard

She is amazing,
she makes the guys go crazy.
I try my best,
and was ahead of the rest.
Whenever I fell like I should cry,
I just look her in the eye.
The nicest blue of the deepest sea,
all I want is with her be.
Her hair is like a ray of sun,
and with her everything is so much fun.
Me and her went on a few dates,
I never was to late.
I just want to hold her ever so gently,
not even her parents resent me.
She has is all,
with her life is like a ball.
I can't stop thinking about her,
her skin, softer than a rabbits fur.
Everytime me and her lay,
I want to forever stay.


Comments about Candace by James Pritchard

  • (6/21/2009 10:08:00 AM)

    A wonderful piece penned, good work, James. (Report)Reply

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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (5/25/2009 11:55:00 AM)

    Another interesting work (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 18, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 18, 2009


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