M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 164,498 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Candles Of Hope - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

I have kept candle of tears burning in hope,
you will come someday to me.

My body is pumping blood like volcano,
taking breath like hurricane.

I think about you like lightning in sky,
an imagination comes out like waves in ocean.

My foot takes up the flight of an eagle,
hands write about you like the slide from snow.

Ah, when this evening arrives,
dips me deep in 'sea of sorrow',

I think about you & miss you.
Tears come out like falling raindrops,

Loneliness surrounds me like wind,
And I really miss you.

Topic(s) of this poem: hope, miss you

Form: Blues Poem


Comments about Candles Of Hope by M. Asim Nehal

  • (10/27/2015 3:46:00 PM)


    Nice piece of work, Asim. (Report) Reply

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  • Sanjukta Nag (9/4/2015 12:06:00 AM)


    Wonderful imageries..... candle of tears burning in hope - remarkable imagination. a very heart touching poem. thank you (Report) Reply

  • (9/3/2015 11:47:00 PM)


    A touchingly romantic poem of love's loss being held in the candlelit tears of hope, as winds of loneliness kiss your memory in my mind. Beautiful sentiments in your poem, touches the heart with your sadness. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 3, 2015



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