Sylvia Lukeman


Candy Floss And Melty Ice Cream - Poem by Sylvia Lukeman

Did you walk by the foaming sea today?
And eat candy floss or melty ice cream?
Did you watch leaping dolphins whilst at play?
Or paddle trousers-rolled-up in a babbling stream?

I should dearly love to know.

Were fluffy clouds drifting lazily by
As upon the beach you romped and played?
Did you shed a tear or maybe cry
When the sea washed your crumbly castles away.

I cried because I missed you so.


Comments about Candy Floss And Melty Ice Cream by Sylvia Lukeman

  • (12/29/2011 6:58:00 PM)


    A really well put together poem. Great work. (Report) Reply

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  • (12/28/2011 11:15:00 AM)


    Hi Sylvia, Great images, sad though! (Report) Reply

  • Okoye Charles Chukwudi (12/26/2011 4:22:00 PM)


    (he smiles) ...dats a nice way of of asking after your loved ones or friends....i loved the pattern...keep it up.

    u cn also read and comment on my poem......thanks for sharing
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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 26, 2011



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