Cardiovascular Puppets Poem by Christopher's Dead

Cardiovascular Puppets

Rating: 5.0


You're playing with my heart, you always have
And still you don't understand
You make me feel so low, and crying doesn't help
Legs so weak I can't stand
You're there in my thoughts and there in my dreams
I tell you these things so you might
Love me as much as I've always loved you
Still you don't care and despite
All that you've been through, all of your pain
I thought that you would understand
But you don't, never did, and now it is why
I've got this bloody knife in my hand

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Iron Panda 23™ 12 March 2010

i like it (: and the title is kool x3

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Stephanie Fiddy 28 November 2009

very nice and i like that you kept it simple and short and sweet ;)

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Lady Of The Rose 28 November 2009

i can feel betrayal in this piece.

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