Selena Star

Carmen-06

carmen was her name
partying was her game
she loved to get drunk
and eddie was her hunk
i love her so
from head to toe
why'd she have to die?
when i heard, i thought it was a lie
when i saw her in the casket
i wanted to crawl in a basket
why'd she have to die?

Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 2, 2006
Poem Edited: Saturday, January 12, 2008

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Comments about Carmen-06 by Selena Star

  • Red Blooded Black Hearted (11/6/2007 4:04:00 PM)

    I'm sorry to hear it happened... I like the poem though, like Rocco Scocco said. It had great rhyming.

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  • Wandering ScarletWandering Scarlet (8/3/2007 12:03:00 AM)

    sad, although i like your rhymes well done

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  • Lylyanna Pilewski (10/9/2006 9:40:00 PM)

    awww that's really sad. great poem though.
    Lylyanna

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