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its mindblowing
fragrance, allure
before it drops
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john i did a poem 'sweet and sour and twenty' have you read it i like this one havn't read (Carpe diem) will have to read it one day anyway nice work regards AJS
It's hard to see how that Shakespeare piece influenced your poem, but I think you did a terrific job. It really flows nicely.
John, I love this one, hats off to you!