Friday, August 12, 2005

Carpe Diem Comments

Rating: 4.8

jasmine sends
its mindblowing
fragrance, allure
before it drops
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john tiong chunghoo
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Uriah Hamilton 12 August 2005

John, I love this one, hats off to you!

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Allan James Saywell 12 August 2005

john i did a poem 'sweet and sour and twenty' have you read it i like this one havn't read (Carpe diem) will have to read it one day anyway nice work regards AJS

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Poetry Hound 12 August 2005

It's hard to see how that Shakespeare piece influenced your poem, but I think you did a terrific job. It really flows nicely.

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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