Carpe Diem Poem by john tiong chunghoo

Carpe Diem

Rating: 4.8


jasmine sends
its mindblowing
fragrance, allure
before it drops
to the ground
stepped on
and crushed
the pretty lass
picks her best
to cloth her years
colouring them with
dreams, excitements,
love, heartbreaks and all
before she loses her greatest asset
lined with lines that spread cancerous like spears
to stab at the heart
grandma's wedding pic
so dreamy her eyes
the man holding tight at the waist
beefing up her best years
jasmine sends its scent to the wind
an innocent pretty lass praying for love to come

inspired by

Carpe Diem
O mistress mine, where are you roaming?
O stay and hear! your true-love's coming
That can sing both high and low;
Trip no further, pretty sweeting,
Journey's end in lovers' meeting-
Every wise man's son doth know.
What is love? 'tis not hereafter;
Present mirth hath present laughter;
What's to come is still unsure:
In delay there lies no plenty, -
Then come kiss me, Sweet and twenty,
Youth's a stuff will not endure.
William Shakespeare

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Uriah Hamilton 12 August 2005

John, I love this one, hats off to you!

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Allan James Saywell 12 August 2005

john i did a poem 'sweet and sour and twenty' have you read it i like this one havn't read (Carpe diem) will have to read it one day anyway nice work regards AJS

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Poetry Hound 12 August 2005

It's hard to see how that Shakespeare piece influenced your poem, but I think you did a terrific job. It really flows nicely.

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john tiong chunghoo

john tiong chunghoo

Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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