Catching The Moon. Poem by Fay Slimm

Catching The Moon.

Rating: 5.0


Water, transparent as crystal,
Tastes of darkness when night falls,
While on evening sands, in fitful
Patterns, pebbles like trelissed shawls
Faintly gleam as in day-time's white.

Moon wilfully plays shadow games
Of catch as you can, with sheen
Repeating sun's stronger rays, framed
Now in luna-light, our dreams
Appear translucently moon-bright.

Not pearls hid in deep rocky seas,
Nor gull-haunted boating bays
Can keep you from penning meaning
For me, in dark's tender ways,
Soft versed love pledged in moonbeam's light.

Sunday, August 2, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: games,haunted,moon,pearls
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Milla Rey 02 August 2009

I have to say nice poem.

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Yelena M. 13 August 2009

'Now in luna-light, our dreams Appear translucently moon-bright..' i love moon-themed poetry, and this piece is truly amazing, how you play with dark, light, transparency and natural beauties, thanks for sharing, Fay.. A.

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Bob Gibson 06 August 2009

The water is cloaked by the darkness of night a full moon shines so silvery bright it leads a path unto mine eyes silhouettes and shapes are in disguise

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Shashendra Amalshan 05 August 2009

Wonderful indeed Fay... I have read like four or five of your new ones today.. I should say they all are very good, Very refreshing.. Reading these sorts of poems help to relax the mind more than anything.. nice to read.. good.. See you soon! ! ! with loves shan

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Fiona Davidson 02 August 2009

Wonderful image filled piece form you as always Fay...Fi....10++++

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beautiful poem and images...so beautifully penned

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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