Cdn...Ere Lighting The Candle The Flame Was Out Poem by me poet yeps poet

Cdn...Ere Lighting The Candle The Flame Was Out

woh din mein aakar
chirag jalla kar
chaleegay


raat hue nahee
surya nikalney se pehle
woh chaldiye

he came during the day
to light the candle
then went away

as the night
neared its end
he passed away

amen

Cdn...Ere Lighting The Candle The Flame Was Out
Wednesday, October 23, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: friend,friendship,poem,tribute
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
THE SUN HAS SET
FINALLY
FOR HIM
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 October 2019

...............LA POETESS....YOUR OWN POETRY IS SO BEAUTIFUL I MUST SAY

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Leeann Azzopardi 24 October 2019

the most beautiful poem that you have written. Bravo!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 October 2019

HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM....LA POETESS....YOUR OWN POETRY IS SO BEAUTIFUL I MUST SAY

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 October 2019

HMMMMMMMMMMMM....LA POETESS....YOUR OWN POETRY IS SO BEAUTIFUL I MUST SAY

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 October 2019

LA POETESS....YOUR OWN POETRY IS SO BEAUTIFUL I MUST SAY

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Aniruddha Pathak 24 October 2019

aadaab shire sa'b, dubaara, dubaara, once more, bis

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 24 October 2019

can't say as PH must find your site opened then they say thanks for the comment Any way I know you are a gentleman

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Aniruddha Pathak 24 October 2019

A day before I gave my feedback twice on some other poem of yours, and PH tells me the page is not available. And I don't know if finally you received

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 23 October 2019

AND THIS S what we call DESTINY

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