My Dawn
you were my first love born
I took you for a dance
once I had my maiden chance
we danced remember Dawn
through the night
your parents were watching
from the balcony
I wanted to kiss you
hug you
closely
I nearly lipped your nose
Remember you said
they had eagle eyes
you scared me out of my wits
then you did smile
but I lied
said yes
I know they will only wrath bestow.
and
I withdrew from dancing
being dangerously
too near and slow
years into the passage of time
I now feel
like a coward indeed
why did I not take a chance
just to kiss
perhaps they'd too have
admired us
my O what a miss
well many tonnes of water
has since flowed down
the MISSISSIPPI
NILE
the THAMES
now tears can't help
the time's lost wonderful
memorable games
just recall the time gone since
but You and I have become
a living entite
you in some one Else's arms
so am I
time heals they say
but my loss of that day
makes me feel like a coward
till today
but it was a risky chance for me
I was mounting a new career
the kiss could have resulted
in the end of me
just @19
(2) Take things in your stride. Now you have your own family, own career, own achievements. It is better to accept reality and to stop living in the past. Please come out of the groove.... 'I wanted to kiss you.... makes me feel like a coward'. Thanks for sharing.
Thanks RM Poetry is just the outline on a canvas all else is imagery half truths to help others not to repeat from our or my faults Lesson to be earnt Thanks RM
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Great imagery and a lovely read. @19 life is viewed from a different angle.
.....HELLOO RMMMMMMMM... Thanks RM Poetry is just the outline on a canvas all else is imagery half truths to help others not to repeat from our or my faults Lesson to be learned Thanks RM AND OTHER POETS
HELLOO RMMMMMMMM...Thanks RM Poetry is just the outline on a canvas all else is imagery half truths to help others not to repeat from our or my faults Lesson to be learned Thanks RM
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I would like to translate this poem
well many tonnes of water य has since flowed down the MISSISSIPPI / NILE / the THAMES now tears can't help / the time's lost wonderful memorable games.... //.... While I appreciate your skill to transform an incident into a fine piece of poetry, one must concede that a man has to go through successes and failures many a time in different phases of his life- from childhood onward. You were hurt but that's life.
yes sir rm and this is life just came b y to thank you all for your readings