Cdn Three....Just @19...... Poem by me poet yeps poet

Cdn Three....Just @19......

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My Dawn
you were my first love born
I took you for a dance
once I had my maiden chance

we danced remember Dawn
through the night
your parents were watching
from the balcony
I wanted to kiss you
hug you
closely
I nearly lipped your nose

Remember you said
they had eagle eyes
you scared me out of my wits
then you did smile

but I lied
said yes
I know they will only wrath bestow.
and
I withdrew from dancing
being dangerously
too near and slow

years into the passage of time
I now feel
like a coward indeed
why did I not take a chance
just to kiss
perhaps they'd too have
admired us
my O what a miss

well many tonnes of water
has since flowed down
the MISSISSIPPI
NILE
the THAMES
now tears can't help
the time's lost wonderful
memorable games

just recall the time gone since
but You and I have become
a living entite
you in some one Else's arms
so am I

time heals they say
but my loss of that day
makes me feel like a coward
till today

but it was a risky chance for me
I was mounting a new career
the kiss could have resulted
in the end of me
just @19

Wednesday, October 2, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: dancing,love,poetic expression,point of view
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My Dawn you were my first love born
I took you for a dance once
I had my maiden chance
A lost battle of love.

My Dawn
AN IMAGERY OF LIFE
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 03 October 2019

well many tonnes of water य has since flowed down the MISSISSIPPI / NILE / the THAMES now tears can't help / the time's lost wonderful memorable games.... //.... While I appreciate your skill to transform an incident into a fine piece of poetry, one must concede that a man has to go through successes and failures many a time in different phases of his life- from childhood onward. You were hurt but that's life.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 08 December 2019

yes sir rm and this is life just came b y to thank you all for your readings

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Rajnish Manga 03 October 2019

(2) Take things in your stride. Now you have your own family, own career, own achievements. It is better to accept reality and to stop living in the past. Please come out of the groove.... 'I wanted to kiss you.... makes me feel like a coward'. Thanks for sharing.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 October 2019

Thanks RM Poetry is just the outline on a canvas all else is imagery half truths to help others not to repeat from our or my faults Lesson to be earnt Thanks RM

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 October 2019

..., , , , , ..........A very beautiful Autumnly poem DID YOU KNOW TOP CELEBRITIES ARE October born mostly SINGERS ACTORS POETS GOOGLE AND SEE mainly in your country ......HIGH ALL POETS AND POETESSES Thanks for your kindness and vote thanks pl read other CDN POEMS 1 to11 yet also

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Anjandev Roy 03 October 2019

loss of that day.......significant. Thank u.anjandev roy.

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Savita Tyagi 03 October 2019

Great imagery and a lovely read. @19 life is viewed from a different angle.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 October 2019

.....HELLOO RMMMMMMMM... Thanks RM Poetry is just the outline on a canvas all else is imagery half truths to help others not to repeat from our or my faults Lesson to be learned Thanks RM AND OTHER POETS

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 October 2019

HELLOO RMMMMMMMM...Thanks RM Poetry is just the outline on a canvas all else is imagery half truths to help others not to repeat from our or my faults Lesson to be learned Thanks RM

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