Celestial Event Haiku Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Celestial Event Haiku

Rating: 5.0


Crescent Moon shining

as storm clouds tumble in rage

eclipse is obscured

Tuesday, November 4, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: clouds,moon
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Existential Despair 07 June 2009

Its surprising how much you got me to imagine without leaving the realms of a haiku

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Ben Gieske 05 February 2009

This one stirs up the imagination immediately with the tumbling and provokes a lot of thought about the rage. Rage does spoil so many good things.

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Shimon Weinroth 10 November 2008

profound ambiguity,10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 09 November 2008

True said. haiku has the power to express in short a lot 10+++++++

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