Celestial Event Haiku Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Celestial Event Haiku

Rating: 5.0


Crescent Moon shining

as storm clouds tumble in rage

eclipse is obscured

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Existential Despair 07 June 2009

Its surprising how much you got me to imagine without leaving the realms of a haiku

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Ben Gieske 05 February 2009

This one stirs up the imagination immediately with the tumbling and provokes a lot of thought about the rage. Rage does spoil so many good things.

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Shimon Weinroth 10 November 2008

profound ambiguity,10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 09 November 2008

True said. haiku has the power to express in short a lot 10+++++++

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