Hope - Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Ramesh Rai (9/14/2014 8:42:00 PM)

Concluding lines are xlent.
As the universe sang the Birth
Long ago or this night brings
Each babe the hope of earth
As thorn or joy rebounds
His love on earth resounds.
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Valsa George (9/1/2014 1:06:00 AM)

In the misty night, when the world shivered in chill and despondency, angels sang of peace and joy and the world rejoiced over the birth of Light! The song of peace and hope those angels sang rebounds leaving beautiful echoes! A lovely write! (Report) Reply

Csdb Kind (5/27/2009 5:10:00 PM)

i like your style. thank you.
do you have the time? (Report) Reply

Raynette Eitel (5/17/2009 11:38:00 AM)

Your meter and rhyme are perfect here, not intrusive but so musical. Your theme touches the soul. Raynette (Report) Reply

James B. Earley (2/2/2009 10:26:00 PM)

Hope - The essence of life itself! Excellent composition. (Report) Reply

Aiswarya. T.anish (10/9/2008 12:11:00 AM)

Or loud the silence talked, refrained
And echoes in the mist
Born as angels sing, a light
Once on earth before remains
Peace His Love brings to night
As each new life is more, proclaims
His birth to shine as angels sing
As the universe sang the Birth

These line are wonderful. I liked the poem very much. (Report) Reply

Qendresa Ulaj (9/17/2008 12:57:00 PM)

i really like this one... (Report) Reply

Prasetya Utama (9/15/2008 10:02:00 PM)

Love and peace become more powerful words in line of poem. Beautiful. (Report) Reply

Stephanie Fiddy (9/15/2008 8:44:00 PM)

Beautiful poem! Very nice :) I like alot! (Report) Reply

Chitra - (9/15/2008 12:28:00 PM)

a great descriptive write, profound in theme (Report) Reply

Anjali Sinha (9/14/2008 10:05:00 AM)

nice
silent night-holy night
all is calm-all is bright
reminds me of that hymn
+10 regards anjali
(Please do read and comment on my poems) (Report) Reply

Ashraful Musaddeq (9/13/2008 10:57:00 AM)

A very nice poem,10 for it. (Report) Reply

Elle B (9/10/2008 1:04:00 PM)

This is a wonderful poem. It has the magic and harmony that cannot be found everywhere. Thanks for sharing this amazing piece of work (Report) Reply

Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (9/8/2008 12:39:00 AM)

On your poem Hope. You have pictured well about Hope. You may read mine 'hope ever alive. Also please read Helen of Troy as good as Cleopatra. Also 'A woman fortyplus aspires'. Thank you for your view on Cleopatra. (Report) Reply

Kris Smith (9/6/2008 1:11:00 PM)

Hope is the seed that will give birth to a new world that we can all enjoy united in belief10 Chris (Report) Reply