Celestial Love Poem by Attoor Sreekanthanezhuthachan

Celestial Love

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Awesome this love, the tale incredulous
He very strong, she elegant & amorous
Eternal love theirs', to each remain pious
True, their love, whole universe envious

Dawn arrives, both disappear for a while
Later, pleasantly, he arises with a smile
Let's him shine alone the whole day, her guile
At dusk, both disappear again, for a while

Whole universe colorful, wonderful show
Ardently she arises with a beautiful glow
All of his lights coming off her in a full flow
Superb this phenomenon, stop, take a bow

Hide their love, act like strangers at noon
Can't stay apart forever, love to meet soon
He goes down for her, for she is his boon
Sun his name & she is the beautiful moon

Sree....

Thursday, April 12, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 13 May 2019

Hide their love, act like strangers at noon Can't stay apart forever, love to meet soon He goes down for her, for she is his boon Sun his name & she is the beautiful moon... Son and moon, a great love affair which goes on for centuaries on end, , . beautiful poem. tony

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Bernard F. Asuncion 13 April 2018

Dear Sreekanth, such a wonderful lovely poem....10+++++

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Sreekanth Sreedhar 13 April 2018

Thank you so much

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Jazib Kamalvi 13 April 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Sreekanth. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Sreekanth Sreedhar 13 April 2018

thanks, for sure

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Chinedu Dike 12 April 2018

Free flight of creativity on winged imagination. Beautiful piece of poetry in verse with rhythmic splendour. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Sreekanth Sreedhar 17 April 2018

Thank u so much

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Sreekanth Sreedhar 17 April 2018

Thank you so much for reading my poems. Looking forward to connect again

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