Chain Me(A Cinquain) Poem by Neela Nath Das

Chain Me(A Cinquain)

Rating: 5.0


Chain me
because you know
I love to be in chain.
Torment with the unspoken words- - -
love you!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It's a Cinquain.5 lined poem.Structure is- - 2-4-6-8-2.Last line with a surprise comment.
This poem is not subjective.No personal experience I put here as the theme.But the theme is general.Love has dual sides- -soft and hard.Here, the speaker wants to be in chain to get tormented with the words- - - Love you.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sj Holland 27 July 2013

Thanks for Cinquain definition. Well crafted verse about subjective love.

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Neela Nath Das 31 July 2013

Thanks Shahzia, dear poetess.Your opinion is my lesson.

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Shahzia Batool 31 July 2013

Hari Smith Holms...we play many roles at a time, readers, students, teachers, practitioners of poetry and Poets...your cinquain is rich in feelings, and your definition of it is full of information...thanks so much! ! !

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Chandra Thiagarajan 31 July 2013

This is a syllabic Cinquain - very lovely- and the notes add to the understanding of the poem! Thanks for sharing!

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Neela Nath Das 28 July 2013

Thanks a lot for all the encouraging comments.

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Dinesan Madathil 27 July 2013

A Cinquain can thus be beautiful like this, you have told, Hari Smith Holms.... Thank you for your comment on my latest poem.

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