Tuesday, July 5, 2016

Chand Raat Comments

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Ghadi do ghadi ko milo to sahi sare shikwe gile door kar dein ge hum,
Wuh aankhein jo ro ro ke ab thak chuki hayn unhein aaj majboor kar dein ge hum,
Wuh hansne lagein gi wuh gane lagein gi wuh mazi mein phir laut jane lagein gi,
Wuh jhuk kar uthein gi wuh uth kar jhukein gi unhein aaj masroor kar dein ge hum,
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Ajay Kumar Adarsh 22 August 2016

waise to is gazal ki har line bemisal hai... fir bhi ankho ke liye jo aapne likha hai Wuh jhuk kar uthein gi wuh uth kar jhukein gi unhein aaj masroor kar dein ge hum, bahut hi lajawab laga....Sir! thanks a lot to sharing with us.

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M Asim Nehal 08 July 2016

Wah wah..ye mulaqat shikwe gile mitane ke liye kafi hai.....Lekin padh kar aapki nazm dil kehta hai aur abhi baqi hai.......What a wonderful poem, Janab, EID MUBARAK TO YOU AND YOUR ENTIRE FAMILY...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 July 2016

Moment to moment happiness comes on meeting you in love and this lasts in emotion and expression wonderfully. Very wise and nice drafting is shared.10

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