Sandra Martyres

Rookie - 24 Points (5th October / Mumbai - India)

Changing Times - Poem by Sandra Martyres

The vibrant colours
In a darkening sky
With the orange sphere
Remaining at the centre
A brilliant sight to savour
The rivers, oceans and seas
Too pay their homage
Reflecting the beauty
Of the moment
In their clear waters
Until the lustrous ball slowly
Disappears behind the horizon
Only to rise again elsewhere


Comments about Changing Times by Sandra Martyres

  • (2/6/2010 8:39:00 PM)


    a lovely sunset...poetized with lovely imagery (Report) Reply

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  • (2/6/2010 8:58:00 AM)


    you are really proving poetic in these lines...brilliant imagery...the 'setting' story with a tinge of sorrow- elsewhere- yellowish...imagination is the tool of creating good poems...a nice tool you own right there...10 (Report) Reply

  • C. P. Sharma (1/31/2010 7:40:00 AM)


    Awesome imagery touches its poetic heights in this poem.
    CP
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  • Dr.subhendu Kar (1/30/2010 3:20:00 PM)


    The rivers, oceans and seas
    Too pay their homage
    Reflecting the beauty
    Of the moment
    In their clear water..................yet according the grace in deep indebtedness, superb write as when nature scintillates by beauty,10++++, thanks for sharing
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 30, 2010

Poem Edited: Friday, March 5, 2010


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