Cinderella Poem by Sandra Martyres

Cinderella

Rating: 5.0


It’s Midnight my love
Its time for me to disappear
And leave behind my
Golden slipper
For you to find
Making sure that
There will be another
Evening of pure delight

Don’t stop me my love
It’s a written rule from above
That your Cinderella
Must leave no matter what
At midnight on the dot
For if she does not
Yours will not
Be a happy lot

Please turn around my love
Cast a glance at the
Beauty that abounds
In this lovely gathering
Of dolled up ladies waiting
To play the game of mating
While you do that
Like lightening
I will be gone
For now
but I promise
I will come back again

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alf Hutchison 09 June 2009

Sandra I often tell folks I was born in the wrong times....I love the pomp and ceremony...days when men were men and woman were all beautifully attired...A lovely look at the 'Cinderella' days... Well done fond regards Alf

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Rani Turton 10 June 2009

Deftly turned and very imaginative.

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an impressive image! ! !

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Meggie Gultiano 11 June 2009

an exciting piece.Wish i am a cindrella too..but i sleep early..oh..my. Lovely words, my dear

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~ Jon London ~ 13 June 2009

What a loving image you've created here Sandra my dear friend...beautiful in every way...keep exploring my lovely...wonderful job

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Priya Gupta 24 April 2018

It is very nice poem

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 07 December 2014

A beautiful and imaginative poem about cinderella

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Patti Masterman 18 August 2009

This is so clever and entertaining. I still love all those childhood tales. Never can get tired of those.

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Bob Blackwell 14 August 2009

Quite delightful, I was brought up on Pantomine and Fairy Stories, they still trigger the imagination from time to time. Cinderella's was confident to allow her prince the pick of all the ladies. But in life to we should be able to choose.

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Bele Lele 12 August 2009

Something different, love it.

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