Cherished Moments Poem by malini kadir

malini kadir

malini kadir

Nagapatinam, a coastal port, Tamilnadu, India NOW RESIDING IN TRICHY

Cherished Moments

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Simple, abundant, free......
cherished? Unceasing swim........
The waters are transparent now! !
Has the muck cleared?
The larger fishes to thank?
Or has the waters been sedemented
Stagnate and still this long?
Has visions cleared
No more cataract?
No more clouding tear pearls
The fishes all move visible
The sun's rays glitter on the surface
As time fly's
It moves more to the center
Heating waters........
Fishes slide away
The Sun and water
Mingle to shimmer........
Blinding sight momentous

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~malinikadir

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 20 December 2015

Simple, abundant, free...... cherished? Unceasing swim........ The waters are transparent now! ! Has the vision cleared? this poem made me think a l ot. thank you. tony

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Narayanan Ramakrishnan 23 February 2011

All cherished moments are sweet and this poem as sweet and nice as those moments.10 marks.

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Nagapatinam, a coastal port, Tamilnadu, India NOW RESIDING IN TRICHY
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