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Where Are You?

Rating: 2.7

Where are you?




Where are you?

Calls out this heart

Flying about in busy business

Letting your rose unattended wilt

Is it fair; ever fair your highness?


The busy bee it tangent flew

past the bunch of fresh roses

youth and freshness

Pervaded his nostrils

making him pause...........


But in this air conditioned room

No....no place....no space

Space for this romantic at heart! !

It was a meet of spirited spirits in quest....

Where the languor of the finer emotions?


Busier than bee! !

Busier than million ants.....In team venture
Had he any time for her? ?

The skies are fading into night
Heart is sagging
Loosing its battle with the Tears
Strong and steady spilling
To fill the space
To add chill to bones
Already with neglect left cold! !

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brishti Mazumdar 08 June 2009

Heart is sagging Loosing its battle with the Tears ...walked along with you thru this familiar way......Brishti Mazumdar

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Nice poem ms.Malini :) Kindly do away with those EXCLAMATION marks in the title - is my EARNEST REQUEST......... with very best wishes -shree

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Graham Stone 01 June 2009

despite the annoying attention grab of the exclamation marks used in the title, I found that I rather enjoyed this poem

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Dr. Antony Theodore 07 February 2021

The skies are fading into night Heart is sagging Loosing its battle with the Tears Strong and steady spilling To fill the space.. Facts of life.. in our busy life we loose so much. tony

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Subbaraman N V 09 May 2015

Nothing can equal NATURE and naturalness. A great thought and nice expression. Congrats.

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Anil Kumar Panda 04 August 2011

thought provoking write.liked it.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 05 July 2009

ammmmmazing! finely written! 10+

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Sameer Ahmed 10 June 2009

Very artfully elaborated the fading human emotion through beautiful metaphors. The worsening condition of a sagging heart indicates that how slowly but progressively time has started to deteriorate the liveliness of life..........10/10

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