A Ship At Sea Poem by malini kadir

malini kadir

Nagapatinam, a coastal port, Tamilnadu, India NOW RESIDING IN TRICHY

A Ship At Sea

Rating: 2.7


The ship is afloat
The hour strikes
Water ripples beneath
The sky is clear
let us secretly steer

The captain, his crew
The planets and stars
Moon is yet to arrive
The sky is palest of blue
Lets them distinctly steer


The waves are high
The ridges visible
The mountains at the distance
Guarding angels look on
Time to start, steer clear! !

The last hold is loosened
The ropes pulled up
The men are waving
The sky is cloudless
First voyage begun

In her flower decked cabin
His lips seals hers
In poignant ownership
As sky bends touching sea
Day light dips away.........
Moon eclipsed by dark clouds
Smiles shyly.........
It is a maiden voyage
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~malinikadir

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joe Corbett 18 November 2009

Very nice. Check out my Maiden Voyage.

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Robert Murray Smith 18 January 2022

Clever poem, nice metaphors opening the door to the future.

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Ruta Mohapatra 18 January 2022

Nice one! Congratulations!

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Jayne Davies 18 January 2022

A great poem! Congratulations on POD!

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Chinedu Dike 18 January 2022

A beautiful poem nicely put together........

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 January 2022

Congratulations being chosen as the Member Poem Of The Day. Hoorray! 5 Stars full. I have enjoyed very much. Thank you for sharing

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Unnikrishnan E S 18 January 2022

Beautiful.. enjoyed reading. Top score

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