Chilled Petal Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Chilled Petal

Rating: 4.5


under the snow
a rose rises
to greet the Sun

touched by a
rainbow
it trembles

as the breeze
catches and releases
the captive bud

falls
lost to the dreams
of lost love

Wednesday, October 1, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: lost,rainbow,rose,snow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 14 October 2014

A beautiful poem, very touching and gentle. Touched by a rainbow it trembles - a subtle poignancy, very nice! ! Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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