Chod Aya Main Maa.. Poem by abhilasha bhatt

Chod Aya Main Maa..

Rating: 5.0

Tum kahan ho maa
Mujhe tumhari bahut yaad ati hai maa
Tum bin sab bikhra hai maa
Meri kitabain mere bikhre kapde
Ab bhi waise k waise hain maa
Sameta nhi Maine abtk
Is umeed main ki tum aogi abhi
Daante hue mere bikhre jahan ko sametne
Magar tum nhi aai maa
Baba k kehne par tumhe taron main dhundha tumhe maa
Bagiya main khilte phoolon main dhundha tumhe maa
Tumhare seenche sonjuhi k phoolon main dhundha tumhe maa
Tumhari hath ki narm sweater pr banai kadai main dhundha tumhe maa
Tumhare sajae mere kamre main dhundha tumhe maa
Tumhare basaye tumhare sanjoye ghr k har kone main dhundha tumhe maa
Tum gain
To duniya rooth gai meri
Bikhar gai meri
Main Sab chod aya hoon maa
Tum bin Sab ujad gya hai mera
Tum bin Sab udhad gya hai mera
Tum gain
To maine palat kar us ghr ko nhi dekha
Us sheher ko nhi dekha
Un rishton ko nhi dekha
Jo wajh thi tumhe khodene ki...

Sunday, December 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: mother and child
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Souren Mondal 01 March 2016

'Tum gain To maine palat kar us ghr ko nhi dekha Us sheher ko nhi dekha Un rishton ko nhi dekha Jo wajh thi tumhe khodene ki...' These lines are extremely poignant Abhilasha.. This is a very moving poem, but just these last few lines nearly bring a little twist to the poem... Why does he say that the REASON that he lost his mother is the home, the city, and the relationships that he had had in the past? ? ? There is a lot more than what meets the eyes in this poem Abhilasha.. I think, this one is amongst the five best poems of yours that I have read.. I am amazed how all of us, who consider ourselves readers of your poetry have missed out in this gem.. Wonderfully written.. A 10/10 from me.. Thanks for sharing.

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