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Life...A Song

Rating: 4.6

Life is nothing
But a song
song of sorrows
song of happiness
Song of love
Song of hate
Song of truth
Song of lie
Song of rain
Song of bird

Song of river
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Saturday, November 28, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Souren Mondal 28 November 2015

An interesting poem Abhilasha. Maybe you could have done better to choose the right set of words in certain places, 'sadness' for example, in lieu of 'sad'.. It demanded an noun rather than an adjective. Nevertheless a good one. Thanks for sharing...

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Abhilasha Bhatt 28 November 2015

Will try to write better after this...thanx :)

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Weldon Davis 22 January 2016

This one is similar to your College like life poem both of which i enjoyed...As Souren said some words need to be gone over to make it flow better..But at the end of the day, it's your poem, and there is beauty in our flaws..Take care god bless :)

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Chinedu Dike 12 December 2015

Unique and lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. I concur with your perspective and point of view about life. Indeed, life is a conglomeration of different kinds of songs, each song determining the dance step of its dancers. Thanks for sharing Bhatt. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Abhilasha Bhatt 12 December 2015

Thank you for your confidence building reply sir....it means a lot.. :)

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Life is nothing but, ...............Beautiful words.

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Savita Tyagi 27 December 2016

Great expressions. Life is a song that we all add our voices to. Its duality is a pitch of highs and lows that gives it all the meaning.

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Rajnish Manga 23 December 2016

What a beautiful poem, a song and an anthem of life. Nature- inner and scenic - is part of a divine game plan. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem.

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M Asim Nehal 24 November 2016

And song of Abhilasha..............100+++

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 November 2016

Life holds everything! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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