abhilasha bhatt


Life...A Song - Poem by abhilasha bhatt

Life is nothing
But a song
song of sorrows
song of happiness
Song of love
Song of hate
Song of truth
Song of lie
Song of rain
Song of bird
Song of river
Song of ocean
Song of crowd
Song of silence
Song of headache
Song of peace
Song of depression
Song of regression
Song of sad
Song of joy
Song of forest
Song of urban
Song of leaves
Song of flowers
Song of himalaya
Song of ganga
Song of india…..

Topic(s) of this poem: life


Comments about Life...A Song by abhilasha bhatt

  • (12/27/2016 7:40:00 AM)


    Great expressions. Life is a song that we all add our voices to. Its duality is a pitch of highs and lows that gives it all the meaning. (Report) Reply

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  • Rajnish Manga (12/23/2016 6:31:00 AM)


    What a beautiful poem, a song and an anthem of life. Nature- inner and scenic - is part of a divine game plan. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/24/2016 11:21:00 AM)

    AWESOME
    And song of Abhilasha..............100+++ (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (11/24/2016 9:25:00 AM)

    Nature
    Life holds everything! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Rosie Bourget (3/5/2016 9:21:00 PM)


    life has so many definitions, one will never finish counting them.....you did such a good job defining life. (Report) Reply

  • Nosheen Irfan (2/23/2016 8:38:00 AM)


    Life is indeed a song. Sometimes the notes are low, sometimes high but flow is always there. I like it that you thought of life as a song. Its a lovely idea. (Report) Reply

  • (2/14/2016 8:58:00 AM)


    So true! Life is made of all these things. Take it all! Love it all! Endure it all! (Report) Reply

  • C. P. Sharma (2/14/2016 8:00:00 AM)


    All these melt into the music of the divine gong. (Report) Reply

  • (2/1/2016 7:19:00 PM)


    Once again, this poem is filled with the beauty of imagery, but it gets lost in the repetition of the words, song of. This would definitely be a great song in itself with a definite rhythm of it's own, just needing to be rearranged without the use of song of. When writing my poetry I constantly use a thesaurus to look up words with like meanings, it helps to increase my vocabulary. Also use it when doing crossword puzzles instead of a dictionary. Hope I'm not overwhelming you, I just really like what you write and look forward to reading more of your poetry in the future. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • S.d. Tiwari (1/30/2016 11:54:00 PM)


    Great, everything is a song and can be sung (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (1/30/2016 10:57:00 PM)


    Just read this poem of yours. Life is a beautiful song and a beautiful poem, it's true!
    The poem would have looked better, if it would be trimmed a bit shorter.
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  • (1/26/2016 8:07:00 AM)


    Life is all of these and all beyond these. Nice expressions and poem. (Report) Reply

  • Weldon Davis (1/22/2016 1:55:00 PM)


    This one is similar to your College like life poem both of which i enjoyed...As Souren said some words need to be gone over to make it flow better..But at the end of the day, it's your poem, and there is beauty in our flaws..Take care god bless :) (Report) Reply

  • (1/16/2016 10:18:00 AM)


    very nice, some sing a happy tune and others not so happy, but the souls sings always (Report) Reply

  • (1/15/2016 10:43:00 AM)


    Beautiful.
    Loved it :)
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  • Rosie Bourget (1/12/2016 12:41:00 PM)


    That's a beautiful one. Very clearly articulated. (Report) Reply

  • Anita Khelawan (1/10/2016 9:56:00 AM)


    U definitely covered the grounds of what life consists of... thnx 4 sharing yr comment... keep writing (Report) Reply

  • Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh (1/10/2016 3:47:00 AM)


    Life a song, an excellent write. (Report) Reply

  • (1/7/2016 11:34:00 AM)


    Life is allows for all feeling us a good poem (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (1/7/2016 7:27:00 AM)


    Life is a song, irrespective of its theme, it is always sweet. A lovely poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 28, 2015



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