victoria foister

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Cinderella - Poem by victoria foister

Amidst a darkened night
lay a dreadful sight,
inside a pumpkin;
she made her home.
Abandoned by her family
a stray in society.

She wears a torn, blue dress
her body- now straw
with stiches tearing apart her sides.
Once she was beautiful,
a prince would marry her any day.
But poor Cinder's never got the chance
Cinderella missed the dance.
Her fairy god mother was a deceiver
now only a rat would kiss her.

Her glass slippers full of cracks
her smile is cracked.
She missed the deadline as the clock struck ten.
Cinder's thought she had till twelve,
but the doors where closed, of the house she used to call home.
Her eye's turned to buttons, all on their own
Cinderella had the pay the price.

So the fairy took her soul
she became a doll with a story- she was a so called fairy tale.
Used to wreak havoc on us humans and to manipulate our dreams.

-06/04/2015-

Topic(s) of this poem: cinderella, fairytale, magic


Comments about Cinderella by victoria foister

  • (5/9/2015 10:33:00 AM)


    love this! ! ! going to be using this poem to show my English teacher with as we are currently doing takes on fairly tales thank you! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • S.zaynab Kamoonpuri (4/7/2015 1:12:00 AM)


    Woah a drastic twist and take on the fairytale in fan fiction and it was great for a change. U wrote it in awesome poetry even if a dark shadow on it. Pls do review my latest poem too titled mother natures. ..... (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (4/6/2015 2:05:00 PM)


    A powerful poem, Victoria. Thank you for sharing (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 6, 2015



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