Circle Poem by Kassem Oude

Circle



Bold circle around me itself built
As I've made sins and have guilt
All pull me down on shoulders put a heavy load
Clog my breath barriers harsh set on my road

Bitterness brims my life a little bit joy I meet
Should I swallow big hay for at end a bit sweet
I've enough of this way costs me as it costs
I would break the tight rope find myself anew post

Don't surrender to black fate will live on my own
Search all night till I see smiling rays of warm dawn
If single day still remain hopes in heart never sleep
If I died before that down in grave I would keep.

1/22/2009

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Rachel Butler 11 October 2009

If single day still remain hopes in heart never sleep Rachel Ann Butler

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Chitra - 30 January 2009

an intriguing title and the contents definitely live up to it.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 23 January 2009

A good read. Nice poem, Kassem.

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Krista Thomas 22 January 2009

i really like this poem. keep writing

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