Circle Poem by Frandy Osias Louis

Circle



I PuT ThIs LoVe In A CirCLe
So ThAt IT WiLL Go On FoREvEr
I CaN'T KeEp It In My HeArT
bEaCuSe My HeArT CaN Be BrOkEn
So To MaKe SuRe ItS SaFe
AnD NeVEr GoNe
I KEeP It In ThIs CIrCLe
So thAt It WiLL AlWaYs COmE BaCk
AnD ALwAys Be HeRe
EvEn ThOuGh My HeArt GeTs BrOkEn

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shilesha Johnson 01 October 2008

i like the line that said ' i put this love in a circle so that it will go on forever. i cant keep it in my heart becasue my heart might get broken.' well done. one of the best poems youve written. great job

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David Threadgold 01 October 2008

Within a circle sound a little caged in and unable to be free. a good write and I like the gwerky print well done Dave T

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Indira Renganathan 01 October 2008

So far it is not an eccentric circle it is alright..brave attempt

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