Citizens Sheep Live Sheep Penned Lives Poem by Terence George Craddock

Citizens Sheep Live Sheep Penned Lives

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you do not know me
I am the wild child at peace
with not fitting in

many are born to be herd sheep
to bow down to fence flock system
to worship all dog rules system

wealth which deceives controls
oppresses steals from individuals
dictates time energy how where

penned flock sheep must live
to be lorded over wild souls
are lives born independent free


Terence George Craddock (Afterglows Echoes Of Starlight)
Copyright © Terence George Craddock

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Split image from the poem 'At Peace With Not Fitting In', by the poet Terence George Craddock. Written in October 2023 on the 4.10.2023.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 October 2023

A very discerning write. I concur with your wonderful and brilliant thoughts. Well expressed.

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Terence Craddock 11 October 2023

I wrote the poems 'Oyster Pearls Of Wisdom', 'Irritant Sand Seed Grain Thoughts' and 'Time Tide Climate Change Whispers', inspired by my reply to a comment made on my poem 'Citizens Sheep Live Sheep Penned Lives', made by the poet Rose Marie Juan-austin and dedicated to Rose Marie Juan-austin.

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Terence Craddock 10 October 2023

any very discerning insight writes, written with oyster pearls of wisdom, arise in irritant sand seed grain thoughts, surf tide wave action wind thoughts, wonderful brilliant tidal surges of mind, which discern transocean hot cold time wave currents, embedded in global world deciphered events

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