Clarity Poem by Shaun Cronick

Clarity

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Each mind is like the surface of a vast lake.
It is calm, collected, smooth and unruffled.
Until anxious thoughts appear and agitate the surface.
Drain the lake.
Empty your mind.
Where there is no water.
There can be no surface.
Where there is no stress.
There can be no anxiety.
With a clear mind.
Only clarity stands alone.

Sunday, November 3, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: thought
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 04 November 2019

A beautifully crafted piece.......10+++

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Shaun Cronick 04 November 2019

Thank you Bernard for another kind and most gracious comment. You are so generous sir. I am so fortunate there are good people like your good self on this wonderful site that lift and inspire me every new day. I thank you so much. Take care.

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Sandra Feldman 03 November 2019

A beautiful, calming and poetically original presentation of the mind, in different moments. Relax, empty your mind. Reaching clarity is not that hard. I find this to be a delightful well presented resume of how the mind reacts to different situations and a very well formulated poem to such ends.

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Shaun Cronick 04 November 2019

Thank you for your most kind and generous comment Sandra. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. And your poems, your magnificent poems I find and take great solace in after reading them.Thank you so much. Take care.

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