Khalilah Bain Mackey

Rookie - 54 Points (Novmember 9th / Bahamas)

Clear As Glass - Poem by Khalilah Bain Mackey

'Beautiful', to me, clear as glass, as I look up at you, I hope that this won't pass. This feeling of 'warmth' upon my skin, 'soft' and light, won't you let me in. Glide along, as easy as can be, taking perfect from, is what my eyes see. 'Listen' to hear, 'not even' one sound,
'perfect' you are 'perfect' I've found. 'Beautiful' to me, 'clear as glass', don't change one thing, thats all I ask.

Comments about Clear As Glass by Khalilah Bain Mackey

  • (12/26/2015 2:17:00 PM)

    Very Profound, Simply stating that perfection needs no improvements. (Report) Reply

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  • Romeo Della Valle (4/24/2011 11:34:00 AM)

    A very thoughtful and poignant write! You got the talent to make through the Poetry World! Keep it up! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! ... (Report) Reply

  • Juan Guzman (5/23/2010 3:01:00 PM)

    writen with emotion and creativity, but i think it could be a little more original, like another line or something ffrom me a 7-8 out of 10 (Report) Reply

  • (5/19/2010 11:15:00 AM)

    really well done on this poem. it is awsome. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 11, 2010

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 22, 2010

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