'Beautiful', to me, clear as glass, as I look up at you, I hope that this won't pass. This feeling of 'warmth' upon my skin, 'soft' and light, won't you let me in. Glide along, as easy as can be, taking perfect from, is what my eyes see. 'Listen' to hear, 'not even' one sound,
'perfect' you are 'perfect' I've found. 'Beautiful' to me, 'clear as glass', don't change one thing, thats all I ask.
A very thoughtful and poignant write! You got the talent to make through the Poetry World! Keep it up! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! ...
writen with emotion and creativity, but i think it could be a little more original, like another line or something ffrom me a 7-8 out of 10
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I would like to translate this poem
Very Profound, Simply stating that perfection needs no improvements.