Cliche Poem by Danny, James Archer

Cliche

Rating: 5.0


Love, have you ever ‘felt’ it? Like physically? Butterflies. The physical process of love is to cliché for me. “Fancy a cuddle babes? ” why can’t I see love, this abstract noun; I want concrete evidence before I partake in such an overplayed tradition.

I gaze across a loud room and all turns silent, your eyes staring into mine. I see only you through a sea of turbulence, and stop, there, now all will be fine. Was that what the reader wanted to hear?
Unfortunately I have yet to experience these normal feelings, and until I do, I’m content with the un-poetic prose that my ‘love’ offers. It’s honest and convenient, what is wrong with that.

Keats would congratulate my ‘love’, an un-poetic attraction that is brimming with indiscretions, the cracks run deep but the tape holds our hearts in together, for now. Such a simply thing is poetic, and moving and all of the romantic things a couple should have, and without cliché. An onion if you will?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vinod Kumar 21 December 2008

Nice Poem, It was an obvious truth, Thanks for sharing your views.(vinod)

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