Been through the Southwest desert,
Been through the Texas hills,
Through a snowy Teluride...
One blow-out on it's downside.
How's it feel to be so free
With a wolf for company...
I'll tell you later on, my friend,
Miles from here, around that bend.
Never saw how close I was
Until the tire threw gravel...
I looked down two thousand feet...
Spun the wheel...God was sweet.
Never will forget that day
Time kindly stopped for me...
I had other plans, you see...
My life planned for no delay.
How's it feel to be so free
With a wolf for company...
I'll tell you later on, my friend,
Miles from here, around that bend.
lyrical piece! i could almost find the beat, the melody, the chords to it. Flows forth from you like a midnight drive under a full moon, huh. best care bud, sjg
A memorable moment brought poetically and dramatically to life through your magical pen. Terrifying and rhythmical ride Sometimes I do believe we have 'someone' 'somewhere' looking after us. love, Allie xxxx
This one just hit me right today. Take time to smell the roses hit me just right today thanks mike.
Great story and write. Loved the way the second verse and the last perfectly complimented the story... a story to scary to tell while looking at the cliff. Zen
I like this one Elysabeth you can taste the Adrenaline and feel the Tension, glad you got out to write about. Take care and have fun. David x
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Thank goodness for then we wouldn't have all your words... Reading this, it has the rhythm of a song...It would be a good song using as a chorus beginning 'I had other plans You See.' Super write Lizbeth. ~~marci. :) ~~