****cloud Never Hides The Moon **** Poem by Dr subhendu kar

****cloud Never Hides The Moon ****

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As sky waits to lap up the blue moon in its crown
the shadow still expands by the rolling the clouds
where each speckle of the wind mimes the blue
moment of the time bespeaks in its tone of truth

yet not befalling when bemoaned by the ridges
even not unnerved by the rigid reeks of ruse
still hope persists by its own tune as attuned
the sunny day comes after the stormy night

today is the truth absolute by relentless dream
tomorrow becomes history by the introspection
still irrelevant by the last tide yet forsaken
grimace may turns the curtain by darkness grimed

mirage is not true by vision as glaring upon from distance
though seemingly exists as we trudge in scorching desert
dreams may expire in its delusion as dying dwarf of shadows
rain of tears precipitates in the furrows by the dissolution

apparent darkness of night becomes non-existent relative
morning when dazzles at the rising sun by the corn field
all seems to be crystal clear when delved from deep within
illusion by the passage would all whisk in due course

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thomas Kurkoski 15 October 2008

What a remarkable piece. Very striking in its ability to inspire...tremendous work. I loved it! Cheers, Thomas K

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Patricia Rudolph 19 September 2008

Very peaceful movement, which made for a peaceful moment while reading.. Thank You! I also read several of your other writings... Good Work!

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Rani Turton 20 June 2008

The absolute, true nature of things that is never hidden by illusionary factors, with an astounding phraseology. Thanks for this, Dr. Kar.

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Catherine Rica Cosico 16 June 2008

Another dazzling poem Dr....food for my thoughts. Cate

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Rema Prasanna 14 June 2008

mirage is not true by vision as glaring upon from distance....... expressive write, metaphors beautifully handled, outstanding vocabulary, a wonderful write. Rema

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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