anushmadhu P.Bharathi


Clouds Of Rain - Poem by anushmadhu P.Bharathi

In between our chat
I chased an alate
(winged-termite)
Which slid on your
Dark blowing hair
And my heart sensed
Clouds of rain.


(In Tamil- Mazhaippen-Kavigar.Phazhani Bharathi)


Comments about Clouds Of Rain by anushmadhu P.Bharathi

  • (1/17/2010 5:15:00 PM)


    a wonderful poem...amazing imagination (Report) Reply

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  • (1/2/2010 2:11:00 AM)


    when an interaction dampens...the downpour is inevitable, unstoppable. If it weren't so rude, you'd be better off to fake an emergency and leave. Well rendered emotion. (Report) Reply

  • (12/30/2009 3:51:00 PM)


    This may be short but its imagery is incredible. Very nice job. (Report) Reply

  • Mark Nwagwu (12/29/2009 2:31:00 AM)


    oh! this is so good, Anushma, brief, simple and vastly expressive, moving; shows a deep soul, ever perceptive, ever caring. a 10 from me
    mark
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  • (12/28/2009 1:07:00 PM)


    This clouds of rain pour water to the flower bud of Anushmadu and..................in future we expect more fragrant flowers! Thank you so much for your prompt and valuable comment on my poem, Good luck! (Report) Reply

  • (12/22/2009 3:03:00 PM)


    Yes this is good....

    Ruthie
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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 18, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, July 30, 2011


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