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Sunday, March 29, 2009

' I Am ' Sky #4 Series

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' i am ' sky
my colors are my moods
' i am' light blue when i'm at peace
' i am ' dark blue when i'm troubled
' i am ' dark clouds when i cry for justice
' i am ' light clouds when i'm in thought
the stars are my teeth in a smile
with the universe.
the lightning bolts is my anger in full fury.
the heavy rains are my tears.

the light rains is my contentment
of a new birth.
the rainbows is my heart at rest.

' i am' SKY.
louis rams
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COMMENTS
Kumarmani Mahakul 10 April 2020
Wonderful imagery and imaginary. The inscription on sky and qualities as per colors according to your mood has been fantastically made. I appreciate the way of your presentation. Thanks for sharing.
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Lee Boueri 05 December 2019
Lovely read, lovely images.
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Louis Rams 14 December 2019
i am sorry for my late response and i thank you so much for coming to my page and commenting
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Louis Rams 14 December 2019
i am sorry for the late response and i thank you for coming to my page and commenting
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Louis Rams 14 December 2019
i am sorry for the late response and i thank you for coming to my page and commenting.
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Jane Campion 03 August 2019
I love the images in your poem. Thank you for commenting on What Remains.
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Louis Rams 03 August 2019
if you see the images then I have achieved my goal
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Prabir Gayen 09 March 2019
the light rains is my contentment of a new birth. the rainbows is my heart at rest. ' i am' SKY....good one
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Louis Rams 29 January 2019
thank you my poetic sister for your wonderful comment
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Bharati Nayak 29 January 2019
A great write depicting your moods in different colours- - To my poem list ! Let me quote- - ' i am ' light clouds when i'm in thought the stars are my teeth in a smile with the universe. the lightning bolts is my anger in full fury. the heavy rains are my tears.
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Savita Tyagi 20 July 2018
Lovely. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.
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Pratik Rajani 04 October 2017
i have got a same view of water you may like to read it check out my poem be like water and thanks a lot for this nice poem which refresh my mind
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Louis Rams 15 August 2017
thank you for your kind words
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Rajnish Manga 15 August 2017
Great experiment in which sky is nicely personified. Grand spectacle. Thanks.
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