louis rams

Gold Star - 12,974 Points (09/13/1943 / new york city)

' I Am ' Sky #4 Series

Poem by louis rams

' i am ' sky
my colors are my moods
' i am' light blue when i'm at peace
' i am ' dark blue when i'm troubled
' i am ' dark clouds when i cry for justice
' i am ' light clouds when i'm in thought
the stars are my teeth in a smile
with the universe.
the lightning bolts is my anger in full fury.
the heavy rains are my tears.

the light rains is my contentment
of a new birth.
the rainbows is my heart at rest.

' i am' SKY.


Comments about ' I Am ' Sky #4 Series by louis rams

  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (4/10/2020 4:27:00 PM)

    Wonderful imagery and imaginary. The inscription on sky and qualities as per colors according to your mood has been fantastically made. I appreciate the way of your presentation. Thanks for sharing.(Report)Reply

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  • Lee BoueriLee Boueri (12/5/2019 3:10:00 AM)

    Lovely read, lovely images.(Report)Reply

    Louis RamsLouis Rams(12/14/2019 1:59:00 PM)

    i am sorry for the late response and i thank you for coming to my page and commenting.

    Louis RamsLouis Rams(12/14/2019 1:57:00 PM)

    i am sorry for the late response and i thank you for coming to my page and commenting

    Louis RamsLouis Rams(12/14/2019 1:55:00 PM)

    i am sorry for my late response and i thank you so much for coming to my page and commenting

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  • Jane Campion (8/3/2019 4:35:00 PM)

    I love the images in your poem.

    Thank you for commenting on What Remains.(Report)Reply

    Louis RamsLouis Rams(8/3/2019 7:08:00 PM)

    if you see the images then I have achieved my goal

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  • Prabir GayenPrabir Gayen (3/9/2019 7:47:00 AM)

    the light rains is my contentment
    of a new birth.
    the rainbows is my heart at rest.

    ' i am' SKY....good one(Report)Reply

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  • Louis RamsLouis Rams (1/29/2019 2:10:00 PM)

    thank you my poetic sister for your wonderful comment(Report)Reply

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  • Bharati NayakBharati Nayak (1/29/2019 10:02:00 AM)

    A great write depicting your moods in different colours- - To my poem list !
    Let me quote- - ' i am ' light clouds when i'm in thought
    the stars are my teeth in a smile
    with the universe.
    the lightning bolts is my anger in full fury.
    the heavy rains are my tears.(Report)Reply

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  • Savita TyagiSavita Tyagi (7/20/2018 9:51:00 AM)

    Lovely. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.(Report)Reply

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  • Pratik RajaniPratik Rajani (10/4/2017 10:04:00 AM)

    i have got a same view of water you may like to read it
    check out my poem be like water
    and thanks a lot for this nice poem which refresh my mind(Report)Reply

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  • Louis RamsLouis Rams (8/15/2017 11:39:00 PM)

    thank you for your kind words(Report)Reply

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  • Rajnish MangaRajnish Manga (8/15/2017 11:03:00 PM)

    Great experiment in which sky is nicely personified. Grand spectacle. Thanks.(Report)Reply

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  • Sarah Mkhonza (12/10/2016 4:57:00 PM)

    A lovely poem. Beats words for it is terse and goes to the heart with a message so clear yet also simple you wish
    you had written it yourself for daily everyone is sky. I love this poem.(Report)Reply

    Louis RamsLouis Rams(12/10/2016 5:44:00 PM)

    thank you so much for that lovely comment

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  • Patricia GranthamPatricia Grantham (9/24/2013 9:10:00 AM)

    A masterpiece of masterpieces Louis. What a beautiful description
    of the sky in all of its glorious splendor. I especially love the line The stars
    are the teeth in my smile. A beautiful and awesome description. Truly
    loved this!(Report)Reply

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  • Wahab AbdulWahab Abdul (5/20/2013 7:12:00 PM)

    very nice..colours express your thought..and you are the sky.. lovely poem indeed.. and you got 80 votes for that.. kudos..(Report)Reply

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  • Roneece Pieters (9/11/2010 1:36:00 PM)

    it was so beautifully true.(Report)Reply

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  • Rachel Ann Butler (11/19/2009 7:45:00 PM)

    'The rainbows is my heart at rest'

    Rachel Ann Butler(Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/9/2009 9:29:00 PM)

    i am ' sky
    my colors are my moods..... in emptiness u r everything... housing numerous stars, beautiful moon and rainbow to refelct your mood and elegance...10


    read mine.. i could hear.... serious thought and rain has come(Report)Reply

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  • Christine Kerr (4/2/2009 9:21:00 AM)

    Your teeth are like stars they come out at night. Couldn't resist Louis, I think a great description if you were trying to describe the universe to a blind person. Well rounded.(Report)Reply

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  • Sandra Fowler (3/30/2009 3:51:00 AM)

    A very unique use of metaphors. I like your colors. Lovely.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra(Report)Reply

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  • Vaibhav Pandey (3/30/2009 3:04:00 AM)

    a good imaginative write.......10(Report)Reply

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  • Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (3/29/2009 10:32:00 PM)

    now this is your most unique piece. i really like it(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 29, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, March 29, 2009