louis rams

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' I Am ' Sky #4 Series - Poem by louis rams

' i am ' sky
my colors are my moods
' i am' light blue when i'm at peace
' i am ' dark blue when i'm troubled
' i am ' dark clouds when i cry for justice
' i am ' light clouds when i'm in thought
the stars are my teeth in a smile
with the universe.
the lightning bolts is my anger in full fury.
the heavy rains are my tears.

the light rains is my contentment
of a new birth.
the rainbows is my heart at rest.

' i am' SKY.


Comments about ' I Am ' Sky #4 Series by louis rams

  • Prabir Gayen (3/9/2019 7:47:00 AM)

    the light rains is my contentment
    of a new birth.
    the rainbows is my heart at rest.

    ' i am' SKY....good one
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  • Louis Rams (1/29/2019 2:10:00 PM)

    thank you my poetic sister for your wonderful comment (Report)Reply

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  • Bharati Nayak (1/29/2019 10:02:00 AM)

    A great write depicting your moods in different colours- - To my poem list !
    Let me quote- - ' i am ' light clouds when i'm in thought
    the stars are my teeth in a smile
    with the universe.
    the lightning bolts is my anger in full fury.
    the heavy rains are my tears.
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  • Savita Tyagi (7/20/2018 9:51:00 AM)

    Lovely. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • (2/10/2018 8:27:00 PM)

    You have penned about a sky's different faces...enjoyable to read....insightful lines...10+++++ (Report)Reply

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  • Pratik Rajani (10/4/2017 10:04:00 AM)

    i have got a same view of water you may like to read it
    check out my poem be like water
    and thanks a lot for this nice poem which refresh my mind
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  • Louis Rams (8/15/2017 11:39:00 PM)

    thank you for your kind words (Report)Reply

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  • Rajnish Manga (8/15/2017 11:03:00 PM)

    Great experiment in which sky is nicely personified. Grand spectacle. Thanks. (Report)Reply

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  • (12/10/2016 4:57:00 PM)

    A lovely poem. Beats words for it is terse and goes to the heart with a message so clear yet also simple you wish
    you had written it yourself for daily everyone is sky. I love this poem.
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    Louis Rams(12/10/2016 5:44:00 PM)

    thank you so much for that lovely comment

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  • Patricia Grantham (9/24/2013 9:10:00 AM)

    A masterpiece of masterpieces Louis. What a beautiful description
    of the sky in all of its glorious splendor. I especially love the line The stars
    are the teeth in my smile. A beautiful and awesome description. Truly
    loved this!
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  • Wahab Abdul (5/20/2013 7:12:00 PM)

    very nice..colours express your thought..and you are the sky.. lovely poem indeed.. and you got 80 votes for that.. kudos.. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/11/2010 1:36:00 PM)

    it was so beautifully true. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/19/2009 7:45:00 PM)

    'The rainbows is my heart at rest'

    Rachel Ann Butler
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/9/2009 9:29:00 PM)

    i am ' sky
    my colors are my moods..... in emptiness u r everything... housing numerous stars, beautiful moon and rainbow to refelct your mood and elegance...10


    read mine.. i could hear.... serious thought and rain has come
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  • (4/2/2009 9:21:00 AM)

    Your teeth are like stars they come out at night. Couldn't resist Louis, I think a great description if you were trying to describe the universe to a blind person. Well rounded. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/30/2009 3:51:00 AM)

    A very unique use of metaphors. I like your colors. Lovely.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra
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  • (3/30/2009 3:04:00 AM)

    a good imaginative write.......10 (Report)Reply

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  • (3/29/2009 10:32:00 PM)

    now this is your most unique piece. i really like it (Report)Reply

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  • (3/29/2009 10:31:00 PM)

    lovely poem...each comparison was very apt...light blue..dark blue...stars...lightning...rain (Report)Reply

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  • (3/29/2009 10:29:00 PM)

    This one is a beautiful sign of what you could call the lords personality. Another good one (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 29, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, March 29, 2009


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