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White Clouds

Rating: 4.6

White clouds
Morphing wonderfully
Watch those bears
Changing into
Rows of elephants
Shaping like
A frail old man standing
Rearranging into children
Playing with balloons.

White clouds
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Friday, July 10, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: children,evolution,imagery,philosophy,pollution,sadness,wind

Fantastic.I am very fond of white clouds and am pehaps a connoisseur in watching their beauty but such a brilliant imagination would never have occurred to me.Excellent piece of work.

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Ivor Hogg 28 July 2009

cloudwatching and dream like perceptions perhaps indicate the way we should travel

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raff rafael 28 July 2009

This poem makes me think about the clouds seen God. Amazing how the clouds it self holds great visions like the ocean. They both seen God.

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Carol Tepana 27 July 2009

I enjoyed and it is such a lovely poem it made me want to soars through the clouds.

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Uriah Hamilton 26 July 2009

This is a very lovely poem.

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HB Rita 31 March 2019

Many ways of describing white clouds....beautiful poem.

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* Sunprincess * 31 October 2015

.........wonderful poem....a summer's day with blue sky and white clouds is super nice ?

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Anie Vans 25 April 2011

This brings back memories of cloud wathcing when i was a child; seeing them change to many different images. Thanks.

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Bursting with a beauty that is both real and refreshing. Excellently expressed my friend.

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Fiona Sunny 25 August 2009

After reading this lovely poem, I've never seen white clouds as themselves. You have changed the whole perspective of white clouds with your wonderful words. Good work!

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