A Sudden Downpour Poem by Valsa George
A Sudden Downpour
Rain beats down on the window pane
As the flood gates of Heaven suddenly open
It is pouring out in torrential flow
Like a Reservoir, all at once, broken
It has come down as a welcome respite
To fan away the humid sweltering heat
It falls in drops and flows in rivulets
Washing the dust of summer drought
With a sudden burst from the weight laden clouds
It lashes down in steam and fury
Plummeting to form ripples in puddles
And filling pools and ponds in hurry
In slanting sheets, it almost pounds
Flooding roads and making puddle
Gushing through pipes and rushing down drains
Water floods, causing men to waddle
Rain has its abode in heavens so high
And hides behind clouds of mournful gloom
In silver strings, it spans the Earth
And cleanses the plants in resplendent gleam
Sudden is the wind, coming to shoo away the clouds
And the sky is once more cerulean blue
As the music stops and the humdrum stills
The water seeps, giving no evident clue.
After an angry couple's furious fight,
As the house goes back to an uncanny calm,
The rain has vanished, leaving little trace
Cooling the Earth and causing no harm
nice downpour; it lasted for a very short time, cooled the environs and vanished.Job done.Well captured!
In slanting sheets, it almost pounds Flooding roads and making puddle Gushing through pipes and rushing down drains Water floods, causing men to waddle fantastic describe your poem madam thanks for shearing a great poem10++++++
Sudden is the wind, coming to shoo away the clouds/And the sky is once more cerulean blue/As the music stops and the humdrum stills/The water seeps, giving no evident clue.....This is my favorite poem! It's my great pleasure reading it time and again! I had some technical problem in voting! I vote this magnificent piece of poetry with a 10
It is so kind of you Dillip to have read and commented on this poem time and again! Thank you so much.
GREAT MOST OF YOUR POEMS ARE 5 POINTERS NOW POETS DON'T READ US MUCH AS BEFORE
After an angry couple's furious fight, As the house goes back to an uncanny calm, The rain has vanished, leaving little trace Cooling the Earth and causing no harm...this metaphorical expression is beautiful.
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After an angry couple's furious fight, As the house goes back to an uncanny calm, The rain has vanished, leaving little trace Cooling the Earth and causing no harm...... touching expression on a metaphorical base. Brilliant concluding. Marvelous work.5 stars.
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I would like to translate this poem
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11/29/2023 8:19:08 PM # 1.0.0.1118
An eye for details seldom observed by most, put together in beautiful lines and it deserves a toast. Thank you Valsa for sharing.