Friday, July 18, 2008

Clove Comments

Rating: 5.0

Yellow butterflies and sprouting flowers
The smell she carried was in the heads
Broken while she was playing in water
Nude with fuming heat of her youth
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Sadiqullah Khan
COMMENTS
Reshma Ramesh 15 April 2009

what a beautiful write sadiq...........well penned

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Kesav Easwaran 18 July 2008

this poem is exceptionally good for the blended scent of flowers clove and blood it spreads between the lines...10

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O Anna Niemus 18 July 2008

You are a truly talented poet narrator

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Amber Lamb 18 July 2008

Powerful, a most intriguing read

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