Tuesday, March 31, 2009

Coincidentia Oppositorum* Comments

Rating: 3.1

The corpus of works from the caves
The soul speaking animate or inanimate
On the earth in things or in the breathe
The One and the only Immanent
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Pablo Cruise 03 April 2009

I love your expressions. Each line alone seperates a consciousness, but together they become a little disjointed. Still overall, a significant piece.

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Greenwolfe 1962 31 March 2009

I read this two or three times. I cannot say that I understand its meaning. I can guess what it means, but that is really a waste to do so. The translation at the end does not reveal a meaning at all. The problem here is that each thought runs into another before it is developed fully for clear understanding. That's really all I can say except sorry. GW62

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Indira Babbellapati 31 March 2009

aren't u talking of binaries in life...hv a feeling i missed out on something here...may be lil too verbose? i dunno...can u tell me in simpler terms if my first statement holds?

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Lt Feitosa 31 March 2009

Fantastic lines! 1,0000000000000000

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Fiona Davidson 31 March 2009

Excellent write Sadiqullah....10++

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