Cold Love Poem by C H Sund

Cold Love

Rating: 4.5


She
believes
in money
and her beauty
to warm silken sheets
but also knows too well
without someone, coldness sets
so she weaves her webbing tightly
to snare a saddened heart for winter
sadly, he never knows her love is cold

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 16 November 2014

A good piece written with conviction to drive him the essence of the poem. I like the articulation and structure of the poem. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Tj Becker 20 September 2008

I enjoyed this form. I'm not familiar with it. I like the trois par huit and tetractys.. It was very well done,

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C H Sund

C H Sund

Wahpeton, ND (USA)
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