Color In Relation Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Color In Relation
Railway tracks are laid
Something good about it is said
It is straight path like life
Run together but competition like edge of knife
It may run smoothly
Sometimes roughly too
With so much hardship and toughness
Yet no sign of pain on face
Both needed to have trust
As it is essential and must
If it lacks strength and faith
It may remain and pinch till death
Love is not something like commodity
It is gift with blessings from almighty
We wish and pray to last life time
But may run counter sometimes
We are hungry animals
Need love in purest form with arrival
It must match all the expectations
The love may show its color in relation
NICE Naushaba Perveen Khan3 minutes ago NICE Comment +1 interesting
Re: Color in relation (Score: 1) by AsIf on Tuesday, July 30,2013 (12: 59: 23) The odd syntax, missing articles and pronouns, and long winded verses are distracting.
Dear Sir, Profound and wonderful thoughts! With regards, Shigufta Uzma, Rourkela Jul 31,2013
Very beautifully said as Tagore said, to make my love fruitful in service. P Nasarudheen, Kasargod.Kerala Jul 31,2013
Very beautifully said as Tagore said, to make my love fruitful in service. P Nasarudheen, Kasargod.Kerala Jul 31,2013
Such sagacious, deep, wonderful thoughts rendered in rhyming poetical verses captures the heart, Mehta Sir! Thanks for sharing! Chandra Thiagarajan, Chennai Jul 31,2013 -
Promila Sharma Love is not something like commodity It is gift with blessings from almighty We wish and pray to last life time But may run counter sometimes
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Railway tracks are laid Something good about it is said