priyanka gyanchandani

Rookie (02 - 07 - 1998 / bhopal)

Colors And Promises! - Poem by priyanka gyanchandani

and then i see in my mirror
was it beginning or the end?
or was i lonely again
i see the chapter end
i see those colors and promises shed...

In this world of two-sided people and fantasies
could not find was i wrong or right..?
just that i know was you were not there
when i need you by my side
i see those colors and promises shed..

Now that i see that i have pen and paper to mend my broken part
there you are siting and playing with another girl's heart
how can i forget that i was just an ink for you
it ended and you brought new
time stands still
and i see you walking up the hill
and then i see those moments fade
and i see those colors and promises shed!


Comments about Colors And Promises! by priyanka gyanchandani

  • Jazib Kamalvi (11/20/2017 1:53:00 AM)


    A sublime start with a nice poem, Priyanka g. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you. (Report) Reply

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  • Federico del Corazón (12/21/2011 6:22:00 PM)


    The poem reads well, reads as of you poured yourself in it (Report) Reply

  • Okoye Charles Chukwudi (12/21/2011 4:47:00 PM)


    very nice....'..and then i see those moments fade.....and i see those colors and promises shed'....nice ending (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (12/21/2011 5:00:00 AM)


    Really, i appreciate your endeavour, may i like to invite you to read my poems
    with best wishes
    ramesh rai
    rkrai100@gmail.com
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 21, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, December 30, 2011


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