Come Back Commander Poem by Philip Jose
Come Back Commander
Come back O Commander! ,
From your monument,
Where you slept for the last.
It is time O Commander! ,
Let the oppressors spring agape.
Come back O Che Guevara! ,
Incarnate, a youth of vigorous hands,
And an igneous iron heart,
For no receptive ears responded,
And no one took up arms.
Come back O Commander! ,
We want you to stare at with your fiery eyes,
The cowards who bear your visage on their T-shirts;
And at the Communist-serpents of today.
Time is most ripe, O Commander, rise up!
Come back O Che Guevara! ,
Thy most hated imperialism,
Is spreading in its' new version;
The bloody-avaricious-America says,
''We will lead the nations''
O Commander come back,
For like gluttonous hags,
They devour the marrow of the oppressed;
The democrats go on with the general will,
Against the will of the general.
O Commander! O non-pareil,
Let's gather men from all around,
REVOLT, win and move again to
The lands of the oppressed;
Let us break the barricades, proceed with our guns.
Come back O Che Guevara! ,
We shall not entreat,
We shall not warn,
Shatter the blood-sucking mansions, we will.
Come back O commander! ,
''The price you sought '' is not yet won.
your writing has rhythm, resonance...right lexicon and right emotion. this may not be your first poem! thnq for the invite. keep your heart open n poetry will sure flow from it!
this poem has fire in it! amazing work..seems u r an experinced writer.looking forward 4 the nxt. thnx 4 all ur comments on my poems.
Unlimited praise and love for commander! How great he would have been? We need great men to serve this world. Great theme.Thanks for share Marks10
Che, the hero of billions! The true revelation! The true human being! The very truth! Great tribute to the Last Human On Earth!
In the best this piece is a revolution within a pessimist transforming himself into an optimist in waiting or otherwise It is a poem which reminds me of Mathew Arnold`s famous statement on P.B Shelley and it is up to you to trace it.
Tiger Tiger burning bright! .....Che is awe inspiring....and very happy to see a poem about him...clear thought so no hindrance to lucidity...simple but a sincere approach...nicely crafted...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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fab poem.. n very good thought......... keep it up brother........