Come With Me If Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Come With Me If

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When the going gets hard uphill
Of a marathon that be life,
A voyage on the edge of knife,
Come, should ye suffer with me still.

The struggle sure shall test your will
As life with misfortune is rife,
And mired in millions of raw strife,
Come, if your raw side can reveal.

Weird are ways of world to deal,
Wayward are ways of life, and strange,
That few manage can with smooth change,
Come, if you can to worldly ways kneel.

Push people down, proceed at will,
The law of life it be today,
No'ne to notso ever gives way,
Come, guiltless if can gulp this pill.

A wish here and a few wants there,
And lifetime's haunts that ever snare,
Come if these toys tinker joy still,
Come, if you feel no worse, nor ill.
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Musings | 03.01.10 |

Thursday, September 20, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: journey,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 09 January 2020

A magnificent poem sir! Liked the penultimate stanza most! I wonder many of your brilliant poems have not found readership because sir you will find here more writers and less readers! For this beautiful poem....10

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Aniruddha Pathak 13 January 2020

Ah, what an astute observation- you will find here more writers and less readers! ... Thanks for choosing to read and comment on this poem of 2010. To me a few discreet poets matter more

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Aniruddha Pathak

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Godhra - Gujarat
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