Comfort Of Silence Poem by Barry Middleton

Comfort Of Silence

Rating: 5.0


I wander now in the comfort of silence
I close my eyes and the clock runs backwards
I am a child again
a warm summer breeze rushes across a field
my faithful dog follows my path to the creek
the memories flow like green waters of time

I hear music and I see an auburn haired girl
she turns her head and gives to me her smile
we dance again
the sweet hot smell of gardenias is in the air
the music drifts into a quickened waltz
to match our quickened hearts as we kiss

midnight is a silent dream of lost images
a small boy who has grown into a strong man
a child again
dancing amid moonlight and flashing fireflies
somewhere in a faded misted wooded valley
and he may be my son or he may be myself

Comfort Of Silence
Sunday, July 10, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: childhood ,dreams,home,memories
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 13 July 2016

Beautiful images..... heavenly ambiance! !

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Barry Middleton 13 July 2016

Thank you Valsa. It is very gratifying to be recognized by a wonderful poetess.

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Nosheen Irfan 10 July 2016

Memories come to us in the comfort of silence....breath-taking imagery throughout the poem. The tone of nostalgia in the poem gets the reader thinking. I love how you recollect the past. The atmosphere you create is so soothing n calming. No less than 10.

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Barry Middleton 10 July 2016

Nosheen, thank you so much for the comment and generous rating.

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Dimitrios Galanis 10 July 2016

The magie of things experienced once which shaped and formed our 'world' so vivid and sensitive presented here, dear Barry.

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Barry Middleton 10 July 2016

Thanks Dimitrios, I rather liked the way this one turned out too.

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