Comfort Of Stillness. Poem by Fay Slimm

Comfort Of Stillness.

Rating: 5.0


Night captures a darkness ink black, when sound
Takes from stillness tangibility. Emerging
Now beautiful gem-stars, which bring a rounded
Diamond brightness to night-time, and surging
Toward me, as prostrate I lie, they embrace
My soul. I pluck them, and thick velvet black
Becomes holed. I fall up into space
As they race to my eye, then I lose track
Of duality. One with the cosmos
I am flying. With such beauty pain is lost.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yelena M. 05 July 2009

Night gives way to the second life which is life of imagination in your poem. Lovely flow! Thanks for sharing and best wishes. A.

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much beauty lies in this immobilized staining.....of heart and words.

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Eyan Desir 04 July 2009

A nice picture was paint with your words

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Lady Grace 02 July 2009

'flying. With such beauty pain is lost. '...that's good..

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Catrina Heart 28 June 2009

As they race to my eye, then I lose track Of duality. One with the cosmos I am flying. With such beauty pain is lost. -- stunning words and imagery...lovely craft to read! ! ! 10

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Bob Blackwell 09 July 2009

Fay, this is beautiful, I mean really beautiful. Bob 10++

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Alison Cassidy 08 July 2009

My dear friend and mentor Mr.s Mangiamele used to speak of 'little flashes of enlightenment'. I suspect this poem was inspired by one of those. It is the listening that is so important - the level of awareness in which the ego mind shuts down and that the soul emerges in all its glory. A beautiful poem, bright with stars! Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 08 July 2009

Darkness, stillness and brightness(of stars) , trio sonata of night. Beautiful poem, Fay. Naseer

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Ron Flowers 05 July 2009

Fay, your beautiful poem takes me there. Ron

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Sandra Fowler 05 July 2009

Night music indeed. It is in the comfort of stillness that true poetry is created. Wonderful, Fay. Always your friend, Sandra

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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