Coming From Me

they say spoken words lead to a bond
they can bring you together as if
you were one
but if my words were spoken
how would you take it?
it would probably break you
because coming from me, my words
would be too strong
you have never heard me speak
of things that make me weep
you never heard anything
coming from me

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Richard D. Remler 21 June 2010

Your poem carries a message worth hearing. Nicely put together. Could use a spell check, but otherwise, 'twas an enjoyable read. A bit of piercing honesty put forth in an easily understood form. Well done. Thanks for sharing. Rick

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Jordan Scown 27 May 2010

woah axed so good =D you have a gift keep it up =D Godbless

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wow i love the messege in this poem i can't wait for ur next one your a great writer

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