Commentations.... Poem by me poet yeps poet

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But like the darkness
beneath a candle
we are ever in search
and
land up wondering in lurch
Beautiful lines thanks

AJ Sir

Yet your autumn
is not different
than mine
side by side
we reside
as many dawns
we have seen together
maybe as many splendid sunrises'

...is such a beautiful stanza.
A great poem indeed.10++++++
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Thanks my dear friend,
create an imaginary beloved
who is your ideal.
Think a love story in a lovely environment,
gift it to your heart,
the heart will return you
sweet dreams to write a beautiful poem.
I think you have already done it,
as you are writing beautiful poems
Akhtar Jawad

Tuesday, February 25, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: poetic expression
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Mahtab Bangalee 27 February 2020

feed the heart love drink the heart love one day the heart will be eternal love

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 February 2020

’I am that light that candle which is lit not by matches but by flames of those who ignite reading my in-core delight

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 February 2020

add on from part second ’I am that light that candle which is lit not by matches but by flames of those who ignite reading my in-core delight

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 February 2020

Rose leaves, when the rose is dead, Are heaped for the beloved's bed; And so thy thoughts, when thou art gone, Love itself shall slumber on. Percy Bysshe Shelley B....AJ

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